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Old 02-17-2008, 10:44 PM
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umda ghazal hai cute... aik bat ka khayal rakha kijiye.. k shair maiN tarz-e-takhatub same hona chahiye... bas is bat ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay huwe kuch tabdeeliyaN kar lijiye...

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