is martaba bohat say naye likhnay waloN ne bhi muqablay

maiN hisa lia... daikh kar bohat khushi hui...

1: Amirmuan
Behr aur Wazan = 2
andaaz-e-bayaN, Takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 4.5
total = 6.5

2: cute mary
behr aur wazan = 2
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3
total = 5

3: land of sorrow
behr aur wazan = 0.5
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3
total = 3.5

4: Mujahid khan
behr aur wazan = 4
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3.7
total = 7.7

5: awarah007
behr aur wazan = 0.5
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3
total = 3.5

6: stubbron lioness
aapne to radeef hi tabdeel kar dia... misra-e-tarah ki ghazal ka radeef "milay haiN" tha.. jabke aapki ghazal ka radeef "haiN milay" hai...
behr aur wazan = 2.5
andaz-e-bayaN. takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3
total = 5.5

7: silent wishes
behr aur wazan = 4
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'mal = 3.7
total = 7.7

8: Saraabs
behr aur wazan = 4
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 5
total = 9

9: Zain
behr aur wazan = 4
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 5
total = 9

10: m a natiq
behr aur wazan = 0.5
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3
total = 3.5

11: Faridnawaz
Farid sahab aapne aakhri shair maiN radeef tabdeel kar dia...
behr aur wazan = 2
andaz-e-bayaN, takhayyul, alfaz ka ist'emal = 3.5
total = 5.5

aap sab sathiyoN ki shirkat ka bohat shukriya.. all da best..
khush rahiye

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