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Default Re: Mujh se jhagad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri

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Originally Posted by Praveen View Post
Aziizan-e-mehfil

Is mehfil mein aata toh rehta huuN lekin apne kalaam ke saath bohat hi taveel arse ke ba’ad haazir hua huuN. Zindagi meiN kuch aise halaat se do chaar hua ke zehn-o-dil meiN ek ajeeb si kash-mkash ka aaghaaz ho gaya. Aur ye ghazal bhi hui. Aap sab ki pesh-e-nazar hai.
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GHAZAL

Mujh se jhagad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri
kyuuN itna ad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri

Mujh se yaqeen uthne laga hai yuuN aajkal
Pal-pal bichhad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri

Duniya meiN kya chali ye badalaav ki hava
Jad se ukhad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri

Halaat ne toh unki kamar tod di magar
Phir bhi akad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri

Meri hi zindagi ke sanwarne ki raah meiN
Jaane kyuuN ad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri


Aapki aara ka muntazir rahuuNga
Praveen Saxena

Aadab arz hy Jnab...

aap shayad kuch ziada taweel arse baad aa'ay haiN, kyuNkay maiN ne aap ko pehli baar is mehfil meiN dekha aur pehli baar hi aap ki koi kawish paRhi, so ham aapko is mehfil meiN khush-aamadeed kehty haiN... umeid hy aap aap ki sangat meiN hmarara uar aap ka waqt acha guzry ga...


baei boaht khoob ghazal kahi hy aap ne... qadry mushkil aur tang qafia chuna mager khoob nibhaya... aap ki mazeed kawishaat ka intzaar rahy ga... likhty raheN aur hamse share krty raheN... khush raheN aabad raheN...
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