Thread: ra'y shumari bra'y muqabla-e-ghazal goi (Mazahia) Dec. 07
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Default Re: ra'y shumari bra'y muqabla-e-ghazal goi (Mazahia) Dec. 07
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ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
sab se pehley to ta.kheer se aaney par ma.azarat,ke masrufiyat ki wajah se time nikaalna kaafi mushkil ho raha hai,lekin choonke hukam huwa tha is liye haazir ho gaya,is baar mukhtasaran sirf marking kar raha hoon,(waqt ki kammi ki wajah se),albata agar kissi ko koyi bhi sawaal poochhana ho to woh mujhey pm kar sakta hai,Insha Allah poori koshish rahey gi ke us sawaal ka tasali bakhsh reply de sakoon,
aatey hain marking ki tarf........

1- mujahid khan
aap ko meri tarf se total marks miltey hain....4

2- autam
total marks............... 3

3- faridnawaz
aap ko total marks miltey hain............7.5
aap ki ghazal ke 4,6,aor 7 sher tawajah chaahatey hain,majmooyi tor par achhi ghazal hai.

4- land of sorrow
aap ke total marks.............4

5- ali4everfriend
total marks............... 4

6- Stubborn Lioness!
aap ke total marks...........8
aap ki ghazal achhi hai, lekin kuchh jald baazi ka shikaar lagti hai,agar aap mafhoom par thori si mazeed mehnat karti to yaqeenan bahot khoobsurat ghazal hoti.

filhaal itna hi,wish u all best of luck,
bahot khush rahiye,
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