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Default Re: ra'y shumari bra'y muqabla-e-ghazal goi (Mazahia) Dec. 07

As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto!

ham kuch takheir k sath marking k liay hazir haiN. meri ra'ay k mutabiq members ki kawishaat ko derj-zial numbers milty haiN...


1- mujahid khan


Behr aur Wazn = 0
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 3

total marks = 3


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2- autam

Behr aur Wazn = 0
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 3

total marks = 3

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3- faridnawaz


Behr aur Wazn = 3.5 (aakhir sheir k pehly misry meiN wazn ki kami mehsoos hui...)
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 5

total marks = 8.5


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4- land of sorrow

Behr aur Wazn = 1
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 3

total marks = 4


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5- ali4everfriend

Behr aur Wazn = 2
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 4

total marks = 6


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6- Stubborn Lioness!

Behr aur Wazn = 4
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 5

total marks = 9


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wish u all best of luck...
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