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Old 12-13-2007, 11:10 PM
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Default Re: Is tarah se mujrim hamain bedard na thehra

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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts View Post
ary wahhh..... kya matla kaha hy, jnab maiN bohat maazrat khaw huN k aap ki is ghazal ko apni kootah-beeni k baa'is abhi tak na paRh saka... umeed hy aap der-guzer kreN gy....

maiN to is matly k sehr se hi nahiN nikal pa raha.... baei kya dohra istamal kiya hy "thehraa" ka... is salasaat k liay bohat si daad qubool kijiay....

dusra shair bhi intahaei umda kaha hy:

Dukh iska nahin hai ke bicharne ki ghari thi
Dukh ye hai ke kion rang tera zard na thehra

wahhhh.... bohat khoobbb.... jnab sabhi ashaar is qadar umda haiN k her shair pr aik gahzal paRhny la guman hota hy.... aap to ghazab dhaa rahy haiN.... is qadar zabardast ghazal kehny pr meri janib se bohat si mubarik baad aur daad qubool kreN, Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN... youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN....
Faizan Bhai, bohot bohot shukria, yaar aap to sharminda hi kar dete hain, main hargiz is qabil nahin, ek baar phir aap ke khuloos aur mohabbat ka bohot bohot shukria
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