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 Re: Is tarah se mujrim hamain bedard na thehra | |
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Originally Posted by Saraabs  Is tarah se mujrim hamain bedard na thehra
Dunya ke muqabil to koi fard na thehra
Dukh iska nahin hai ke bicharne ki ghari thi
Dukh ye hai ke kion rang tera zard na thehra
Hamdard bohot the jo koi dard nahin tha
Jab dard barha koi bhi hamdard na thehra
Taghoot manata hai jo faateh ki tarah jashn
Kia koi bhi basti main jawan mard na thehra
Tere bhi Saraab ishq main kuch kam thi hararat
Tu uske rawayye ko bohot sard na thehra | ary wahhh..... kya matla kaha hy, jnab maiN bohat maazrat khaw huN k aap ki is ghazal ko apni kootah-beeni k baa'is abhi tak na paRh saka... umeed hy aap der-guzer kreN gy....
maiN to is matly k sehr se hi nahiN nikal pa raha.... baei kya dohra istamal kiya hy "thehraa" ka... is salasaat k liay bohat si daad qubool kijiay....
dusra shair bhi intahaei umda kaha hy:
Dukh iska nahin hai ke bicharne ki ghari thi
Dukh ye hai ke kion rang tera zard na thehra
wahhhh.... bohat khoobbb.... jnab sabhi ashaar is qadar umda haiN k her shair pr aik gahzal paRhny la guman hota hy.... aap to ghazab dhaa rahy haiN.... is qadar zabardast ghazal kehny pr meri janib se bohat si mubarik baad aur daad qubool kreN, Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN... youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN....
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