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 Re: gum gashta -e-khayal-e-rah-e-shehr-e-yaar tha | |
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Originally Posted by khalidrawat  Gum gashta-e-khayale-rahe-shehre-yaar tha
Manzil mager safar ki koi khar zaar tha
Roota tha gah, gah lagata tha qehqaha
Her giz mujhe na dil pe koi ikhtiyaar tha
Kerta tha koi baat tu mu.Nh pherta tha mai.N
Her lafz guftugo ka mere dil pe baar tha
Kuch bhi junoo.N ke shoor mai.N aata na tha samajh
So dil ko ikhtilaat se yaksar he aar tha
Dikhti the jhalak chaand mai.N us mah noor ki
Us raat chaand ho baho tamseel-e-yaar tha
Aah-e-sahar the naghma-e-subh-e-chaman tu saaz
Nakhun ki cher chaar se daaman ka taar tha |
As-salam-o-alaikum Khalid bhai,
khoob ghazal kahi hy aap ne, tamaam shair hi achy lagy mager junoon wala shair kuch siwa hi dil ko laga... bohat si daad is umda nazm ki nazr, khususan is shair ki nazr... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN.....
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