Thread: kabhi jo zeest main aaya muqaam-e-dilshikni
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Old 12-05-2007, 03:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Shehr-e-Wafa View Post
wah .. zain ji .. itni umdagi se aapne is mushkil radeef k saath nazm kahi ..
aur her her shair bohat hi be-sakhta sa mehsoos ho raha hai, jaise likhte hue kisi diqqat ka samna na kerna paRa ho ..
tamam asha'ar ke mazameen bhi be-hadd pasand aaye
ghazal her lehaz se mukammal mehsoos hui
is behtreen takhleeq per bohat sari daad qubool kijiye
khush rahiye sadaa
mohtarma shehr-e-wafa saaheba,be had mamnoon hoon ke ghazal aap ne pasand farmaayi aor hosla afza kalmaat se nawaaza,
aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
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