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Originally Posted by Saraabs  Bohot hi umda meri behen, bohot hi shandar likha tha tum ne, ek do jagah par rawani ka masla hai, wo tum dobara khud parh kar durust kar sakti ho, but overall bohot khubsoorat nazm hai, aur chand ek lines to itni besakhta hain ke seedhi dil ko ja lagti hain....maslan ye ke
Jo din pahaaR thay kabhi, wo din paloN maiN kaT gaye (Wahhhhhhhh)
Aur phir ye
Mere qadam bhi uTh paRay, waheeN se maiN palaT paRi
Meri anaa bhi us lamhe, mujhe hara ke haNs paRi (bohot hi umda, shandar) |
beyhud Shukriya itni dher sari hosla afzai ka
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hmmm...aik to yahan garrbarr hai...
Tanha they'hum qadam chaley koshish jari hai...dekhen kub sahi line humari aqil mein samati hai aik bar phir sey bohttt Shukriya
khush rahen