Bohot hi umda meri behen, bohot hi shandar likha tha tum ne, ek do jagah par rawani ka masla hai, wo tum dobara khud parh kar durust kar sakti ho, but overall bohot khubsoorat nazm hai, aur chand ek lines to itni besakhta hain ke seedhi dil ko ja lagti hain....maslan ye ke

Jo din pahaaR thay kabhi, wo din paloN maiN kaT gaye (Wahhhhhhhh)

Aur phir ye

Mere qadam bhi uTh paRay, waheeN se maiN palaT paRi
Meri anaa bhi us lamhe, mujhe hara ke haNs paRi (bohot hi umda, shandar)

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Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay
DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay
(Qabil Ajmeri)