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Old 11-01-2007, 06:27 PM
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Default Re: Ashk Ruke tow sahra ho ga

Ashk ruke to sehra hoga
Beh nikle to darya hoga

Matla hi ghazab ka kaha hai...mashaAllah...a ur uske baad poori ghazal hi ghazab dha rahi hai....khaas kar ke ye ash'aar

Tujh se bichaR kar dil ka panchi
Dali dali roya hoga

Shaam-e-talab se subh-e-fana tak
Dil ka safar bas itna hoga

TukRe dil ke chun lo khud hi
Wo to jag maiN uljha hoga

Bhai ye ghazal bhi "Bik chuke saare raazdaaN kab ke" ki tarah shandar hai...aap mashaAllah bohot achche shaire haiN...keep it up
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