Re: Ajab Koshish | | as-salam-o-alaikum Rameesa Sahiba,
kya khoob nazm kahi hy ap ne, isy ham aik achi nasri naazm keh sakty haiN, go k nasri nazm kehna itna aasan kam nahi hy, mager ap ne khoob kiya... sirf aakhri misry k last meiN "na" ka lafz izafi sa laga, is k baghair bhi baat pori ho rahi hy....
isi trha acha acha likhti aur ham se share krti raheN, khush raheN abad raheN...
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Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha
aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...
(Bedil Haidri) |