Re: Ashk Ruke tow sahra ho ga | | dekhna tujh ko, milna tera
Khawab kahan ye poora ho ga
Tujh sey bicher ker dil ka panchi
daali daali roya ho ga
wah Qamar Zaman Sahab, achi ghazal kahi ap ne, rawaN mager choti behr ki is ghazal k sabhi ashar pasand aa'ay, mager oper likhy do shair to bohat hi khoob haiN... itny kam gunja'ish meiN mazmoon ko smaitna khasa kaThin kam hota hy, mager ap ne achy andaaz meiN nibhayaa...
isi trha likhty aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola ap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy....
dua-go
faizan Ahmad.
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Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha
aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...
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