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Old 09-20-2007, 12:12 PM
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Default Re: Abhi Mohabbaton k hisaar main hoo
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Originally Posted by ahmedshoaib77 View Post
G bahoo shukriyaa.
mager nay jo tarkeeb ikhtiyaar ki uss ki logic aur wajoohaat hain

pehlay misray main Abhi ka lafz yeh zahir kar raha hay k yeh waqtii kai-fi-yat hay. mohabbatin aaj kal main bahoot jaldi muntaqil ho jati hain.
phool beech bahar main k matlab yeh k choo k mohabbat naee hay iss leyay jaisay phool bahar main ghiraa hota hay iss tara say mukhatib bheee mohabat ka center hai.

key akheyaal hai. please comment
yaqeenan maine jo tabdeeli ki , woh apke asal khayal say mukhtalif hogi... dar'asl maine to wazan k hawalay say tabdeeli ki thi, maiN to sirf aik misal daina chahti thi k asah'ar is tarah wazan maiN honay chahiyeN...

baqi ap yaqeenan mujh say behtar samajhtay hoNgay..

khush rahiye
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