khush amdeed Ahmed sahab..
umda asha'r kahay aapne.. dad qubool kijiye... aur mashq jari rakhiye..
pehlay shair maiN thori si tabdeeli kar rahi hooN ... daikhiye..
muhabbatoN k hisar maiN ho
k jaisay ghuncha bahaar maiN ho..
isi tarah say baqi asha'r bhi daikhiye ga..
khush rahiye