Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts

as-salam-o-alaikum fairy sahiba

achy sher kahy aap ne, thoughts khoob haiN... mager aap k sheroN meiN rawani au wazn k elawa aik do grammer ki mistakes bhi nazer aaeiN...

lafz "suljhan" moanas hota hy jabkay aap ne pehly sher k dusry misry meiN "Is ka suljhan" likha hy. yahaN "Is ki suljhan" aa'ay ga.

isi sher k pehly misry meiN ap ne aik lafz likha "niklao", ye lafz "nikalo" hota hy.

sher kehny k liay alfaaz aur grammar ka khyal rakhna bhi bohat zuroori hota hy. likhti raheN, aur rawani ki taraf tawaju deN. Allah Mola aap ko bohat zaida ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN....