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Originally Posted by cutefairy1  Mujhay is Uljhan say niklao koi
Is ka suljhan mujhay batlao koi Sawar hon jis Kasti mein main
Osay Sahil tak Puhanchao koi Meri Uljhan b tum suljhan b tum
Is kashmakash say nikalo Koi Kyun mangate ho sahara Sana
Is dast main kissi ka nahi koi |
as-salam-o-alaikum fairy sahiba
achy sher kahy aap ne, thoughts khoob haiN... mager aap k sheroN meiN rawani au wazn k elawa aik do grammer ki mistakes bhi nazer aaeiN...
lafz "suljhan" moanas hota hy jabkay aap ne pehly sher k dusry misry meiN
"Is ka suljhan" likha hy. yahaN
"Is ki suljhan" aa'ay ga.
isi sher k pehly misry meiN ap ne aik lafz likha
"niklao", ye lafz
"nikalo" hota hy.
sher kehny k liay alfaaz aur grammar ka khyal rakhna bhi bohat zuroori hota hy. likhti raheN, aur rawani ki taraf tawaju deN. Allah Mola aap ko bohat zaida ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN....