Thread: kabhi jo zeest main aaya muqaam-e-dilshikni
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Old 09-07-2007, 11:32 PM
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Originally Posted by qamar94 View Post
hameesha ki tara khubsoorat kalaam...
zain ji meri eik ghazam mein hymwatan joor ke likha gaya tha jis pe pakistan ke adabi halqoon ne eitraaz kiya hai ke adab mein baham likhna ghalar hai tab muje hum watan likhna para is se pehle ke aap pe eitraaz ho dilshikni alehda kar dijiye
aur isse dil shikni likhye
muhabatoon ke saath
qamar
be had mamnoon hoon Qmar bhahi ke ghazal aap ne pasand farmaayi,aor hosla afza alfaaz se nawaza,

lijiye janaab,ham ne ghazal edit kar di,
rahnumaayi ke liye shukriya,.........we sey achha lagey ga agar aap mazeed is par kuchh roshani daalain,ke aek saath likhney se kaya farq parta hai,umeed hai aap apne tajurbey ki roshani main is par mazeed kuch roshani daalain ge,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
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