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as-salam-o-alaikum Nadeem Sahab! urdu poets club meiN khush-aamadeed, umeed hy k aap ka waqt yaahaN acha guzry ga...1.gif ")1") donoN sher mafhoom k lehaz se achy kahy haiN ap ne, mager in meiN shriyat ki kami lagi kuch... khas kr pehly sher meiN... us sher k dusry misry ko kuch tabdeel krny koshish kreN to sher acha ho ja'ay ga... likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN, aur aainda koi ghazal ya nazm bhi enayat kreN.... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN...
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