Thread: Nataaij baraye muqabla-e-nazm goi..(Aug-07)
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Old 09-01-2007, 08:22 PM
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Default Nataaij baraye muqabla-e-nazm goi..(Aug-07)
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is maah muqabla-e-nazm goi k liye mosool honay wali tamam nazmaiN hi bohat umda raheeN..hum un tamam sathiyoN k shukr guzar haiN jinhoN ne muqablay maiN shirkat ki..

tamam judges k diye gaye marks ki average hi final score hoti hai.. shurka ki kawishat ko jitnay points milay...darj-e-zail haiN;

Yahaan yeh batana bhi bahot zaroori hai ke Mohtaram Qamar saaheb ne bhi muqaabaley ki thread main apni be had khoobsurat tehreer post ki,ham us tehreer ko aek AEZAAZI tehreer tasawur kartey hain,is liye ussey final marking meiN shamil nahi kiya ja raha.

1-Ather29 = 6.1

2-Ali4everfriend = 5.8

3-Chisthy1 = 6.4

4-frantic. hectic = 6.9

5-Zeneya = 7.6

6-Silent_Wishes = 8.6

is tarah muqablay k fateh qarar paye haiN... "Silent_wishes"... bohat mubarak ho Silent_wishes..

AY M'RE ARZ - E - WATAN

thaa qyaamat thoo rhay azaaD ay arz – e – watan
teraa har gosha rhay abaaD ay arz – e – watan

paak hai mitti t’ri iss maiN shahiidoN ka hai khooN
Teri sarhad ke hifazat maiN m’re dil ka s’kooN

naam se tere m’ri iss dehR maiN pehchaan hai
tuj pe apni jaan warooN ye m’ra eemaan hai

maiN j’haaN jaooN wahii roshan t’ra hii naam ho
pasbaaN hooN maiN t’ra, teri hifazat kaam ho

aasmaaN tak naam tera dehR maiN ooNchaa rhay
ay watan , ay dais tera har jaga charchaa rhay

ay watan teri b’qa maiN hai asal meri b’qa
tuj pe mere paak ALLAH ka rhay sayaa sadaa

aakhir maiN hum phir un tamam sathiyoN k shukr guzar haiN..jinki kawishat ne is muqablay ki ronaq barhai..

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