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Old 08-24-2007, 11:29 PM
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achi kawish ahi... mashq jari rakhiye..

aik bat kehna chahooNgi k apne ghazal maiN qafiye par tawajja nahiN di.. jaisa k matla maiN aapne "khizaaN aur jaN" ko qafiye k taur par istemal kia hai...to ab apki ghazal k qawafi inke hi hum sooti alfaz honay chahiyeN thay..

wazan par bhi tawajja dijiye..

khush rahiye
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