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Default Re: Aai dard ki shiddat tu hi bata, us pyaar ka alam kia hoga
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Originally Posted by qamar94 View Post
adaab.
kaise hain aap... apne khiyaal ka izhaar karne se peshtar mein ne baqi dostoon ke khiyalaat bi parhe ... yeh deekh ke acha nahin laga ke yahan dostoon ki kissi ghalti ya khaami pe na to tooka jata hai aur na hi tashi ki jaati hai...zubaan ki tamaam khamiyoun awzaan ki aglaat aur diction ki khamiyoon pe bi daad di jaati hai .... yeh baat dil rakhne ko to theek hai lekon is tara to kabhi dostoon ki isslah nahin ho sake gi..... yahan is forum mein mehro... zain...atif aur doosre bahout se acha shohra aur shairaat mojoud hain un se guzarish hai ke apna yeh tarz e amal badal ke ache likhne waloon ko un ki khamiyoon se agah kareen ta ke un ki fikar ko balughat mil sake......
mein aap se bi guzarish karoonga ke in sathiyoon se mashwra mangeen
jab hijr qayamat jaisa hai iqraar ka aalam kya ho ga.........

jab aap ne pehle hijr bandha hai to iqraar ka hijr se kya tahaluq bana.... haan agar aap inkaar qayamat jaisa hai ikraar ka alam bandhte to sahi tha...

ae dard ki shiddat tu hi bata us pyaar ka alam kya ho ga........yeh misra istehfamiya tha doosre misre mein jawaab aata to theek tha

aap ke khiyaal ka husn apni jaga qayam hai lekon khiyaal ke izhaar ke liye jo misre likhe gaye un mein tasalsal aur rabt ki kammi hai...

mere in ilfaaz se agar aap ke jazbaat ko thees poonche to muje muaf kijiye ga lekon muje yakeen hai jab aap khud ghoor kareen gay aur socheen gay to aane waale naye din aap ko meri baat achi lage gi..
aap ka mukhlis aur dua goo
irshad qamar phd. urdu/arabic/persian
amsterdam holland
email.qamar94@gmail. com

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
ji Qamar bhahi,aap ne jo bhi kaha,aek aek lafz sach hai,aor mujhey us se qat.an koyi ikhtalaaf naheen,siwaaye aek baat ke,aor woh yeh ke aap ne mujhey bhi bahot oonchi jagah pe la bithaaya hai,jab ke haqeeqat bahot mukhtalif hai,(kiyoonke main to khud abhi seekhaney ke amal se guzar raha hoon).
is ke baawajood ke main kuchh ziyaada naheen jaanta, yaqeenan aap ne dekha bhi ho ga ke ham apni si koshish kartey rehtey hain,matlab jo kuchh mujhey aata hai,saathiyon ko bata kar khushi mehsoos karta hoon,aor batata rehta hoon,
lekin yahaan aek baat mazeed share karna chahoon ga ke mera maanana hai ke tanqeed (be shaq islaahi hi kiyoon na ho) ke saath saath hosla afzaayi ki bhi zaroorat rehti hai,warna naye likhney waalon ke liye safar khaasa dushwaar ho jaata hai,aor dekhaney main aaya hai ke kayi baar to woh himmat hi haar jaatey hain,(mumkin hai meri soch ghalat ho),so meri koshish rehti hai ke donon cheezon yehni islaah(mumkina had tak),aor hosla afzaayi,donon hi jaari rahain,
umeed hai aap meri baat samajh rahey honge ke main kaya kehna chaah raha hoon,
phir bhi INSHA ALLAH koshish rahey gi ke aap ke kahey huye pe behtar andaaz main amal peira ho sakoon, merey haq main bhi dua kijiye ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
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