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Old 08-07-2007, 11:37 AM
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Default Re: Muqabla baraye Nazam goi...Aug-07

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Originally Posted by qamar94 View Post
Qamar sahab aap ne bilkul sahi bateN keiN, k ham abhi tak kohna moasharti qadroN meiN jakRy hu'ay haiN, aur us maqsad ko framosh kr chuky haiN k jis maqsad k husool k liay hamary aaba-o-ajdaad ne itni qurbaniaN deN... oper share ki'ay ga'ay ash'aar bhi isi bat k aaeina daar haiN. aur bohat kuch sochny pr majboor krty haiN...

mager aik technical si bat arz krny ki jasarat kr raha huN, umeed hy aap mind nahi kreN gy. k jesa k title se zahir hy ye contest nazm ka hy... aazadi k hawaly se nazm kehny ka. mager aap ki takhleeq k aahang se lagta hy k ye aik ghazal ki shakl meiN hy... aap kya kaheN gy is bary meiN???
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