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Old 07-31-2007, 10:16 PM
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Default Re: Itnay bhi marasim na bharhaye koi.....



umda janab...bohat umda khayal hai.. lekin agar ap is rubai ko aisay kar laiN ;

aah itnay bhi marasim na barhaye koi
aankh bhar aaye k jab hath churaye koi
jan dainay maiN koi aar nahiN hai lekin..
kash kuch dair talak sath nibhaye koi...

to wazan ka masla bhi khatam ho jayega..

khush rahiye
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