Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum - View Single Post - raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-tarahi ghazal..

**kanch ki mehroo** · #1 07-21-2007, 10:28 PM

is maah muqablay k liye jo misra-e-tarah muntakhib kia gaya...woh hai ;

~daikha hai kaii bar charaghoN ko bujha kar..~

humaisha ki tarah is martaba bhi bohat say mu'aziz sathiyoN ne apni khubsoorat ghazliyat k sath muqablay maiN shirkat ki...hum unke shukr guzar haiN...

nataij ka ailan judges ke mushtarka faislay par mabni hoga...judges say guzarish hai k woh 31st July tak humaiN apne faislay say agah kar daiN...judges har kawish ko 1-10 tak marks day saktay haiN...aakhir maiN tamam marks ko jama kar k hatmi nataaij ka ailan kia jayega..

humaray Mohtaram judges k naam darj-e-zail haiN;

(Ail Lamha, Zain, Kanch ki Mehroo, WanderingThoughts, Sohail Malik, Mehtab, saahir)

Evalutaion ka criteria yeh hai;

Behr aur Wazn = 4
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takay'yul, alfaaz ka istamal = 6
total marks = 10

muqablay maiN shamil ghazlaiN yeh haiN;

1: Furqan85

Dekha Hai Kai Baar Cheraghon Ko Bujha Ker
Chamkta Hai Woh Khursheed Mujhey Naaz Dikha Ker

Hum Taab Na Laien Ge Yeah Dil Chain Na Paye Ga
Aa Jatey Hein Phir Bhi, Zara Joosh Mein Aa Ker

Kuch Tarz-e-Mansoori Mein Huey Daar Ke Ghazi
Kuch Mar Mitey Qadmon Mein Terey Taab Na La Ker

Kabhi Gosha-e-Wehshat Ho Ke Mehfil-e-Tanhai
Har Raat Saja Rakhi Hai, Teri Yaad Saja Ker

Is Baat Pe Cherey They Yeah Saaz-e-Dil-e-Ulfat
Sisaktey Hien Mazaamir Ab Dekhien To Baja Ker

Aye They Nashiman Ko Merey Aag Laganey
Dil Apna Jala Bethey Hein Mujhey Aag Laga Ker

Tha Qurb-e-Musalsal Ke Iradhon Mein Bhi Ruswa
Sir Aur Bhi Jukta Hai Yeah Ilzaam Utha Ker

Roz-e-Aakhir Ko Suna Hai Ke Maazi Ki Hai Tehqeeq
Tum Ruth Ke Dekho Gye,Hum Dekhien Ge Mana Ker

Ae Rind Guzar Ja Tu Nazron Ko Juka Ker
Ye Manzil-e-Zahid Hai Yan Daman Ko Bacha Ker

Yeah Rah Hai Janat Ki Yeah Iman Ke Rahi Hein
Tu Rah-Bar-e-Gham Hai, Rindhi Mein Jiya Ker

Koi Kushta-e-Jaa.n Saqi Pemaney Mein Nahi Baqi
Yeah Wasila-Roh De Mujhko To Ankh Mila Ker

Mahol Ke Asraat Bhi Hotey Hein Sukhan Per
Is Naama-e-Ferda Ko Furqat Mein Likha Ker

Mat Dhondh Re Qasid Inkaar Ke Harfon Ko
Tu Phir Chala Ja Koi Hasrat Si Bandha Ker

In Logon Ko Hasil Hai Bari Shaan-e-Haqaarat
In Logon Se Furqan, Bari Fursat Mein Mila Ker

Her Rang Mein Jachta Hai,Kia Rangat Hai Nirali
Is Gumbad-e-Khazra Ke Tu Saye Mein Raha Ker.

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2: Shoaibb4u

Dekha Hai Kai Baar Cheraghon Ko Bujha Ker,
Shama k gird perwana kai baar bun ker,
Naam lia ha phir say tera,
Ek naay josh main aa ker,
Ker raha hon tujko ab yaad,
Tere yaad ki mehfil saja ker,
Jo dard tu naay dia tha,
Uski kuch tu dawa ker,
Hasar main raha nahi koi panshi,
Bhair ki kuch tu khabar ker!

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3: Fehmeeda ishtiaq

KER DAY ROSHNI MERAY WERAN GHAR MAY
HUQ KABHI TO DOSTI KA ADDA KER. . . . . . .

TERA TASAVUR HI BOHAT THA DIL KAY LIAY
KUB HUM NAY KAHA THA , TU WAFA KER . .

UJALAY TERI YADOON K SATH RAHTAY HAIN
KABHI TO KAED SAY APNI, HUMAIN REHA KER

TERAY KEHKAHAY JENAY KI UMUNG DAIN GAY
KABHI TO KHUL KAY TU BHI, HUNSA KER . . .

KATUL BHI MAAF HAIN TUJHKO AA SANAM
HAY IJAZAT YE, TU BAR BAR KHATA KER..

ISHQ KI CHOTE HAY BOHAT HE GHEHRI
TU HAY MASIHA MERA, KOI TO DAWA KER..

ZINDAGI KI HAQEEQAT TO SAMAJNAY K LIAY
DEKHA HAY KAI BAR CHARAGON KO BUJHA KER

MERAY LIAY NA SAHI , RUSM E DUNIYA K LIAY
DOSTI KER LAY HUM SAY, SUB KUCH BHULA KER

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4: Faypal

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5: Yasmin Ahmad

ab yaadoun ko tarie apnay senay se laga ker
dekha hai kie bar charaghoun ko bujah ker

woh apni mohabat ka tamsha dekah gya
qurban huwa shama pay per apnay jala ker

hathoun ko jo thama beray payar se mein ne
narraz huie muj se haath apna churra ker

sangdill hai bhut tu to kia jan hi leay gie
gar din mein neigh miltie to khawaboun mein mila ker

gunahoun ka ehsaas jab dill mein sama jaay
tuba keay lea Allah kay agay juka ker

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6: Bekhudi

ھر آن مچلتی ھوئی خواھش کو سُلا کر
دیکھا ھے کئی بار چراغوں کو بُجھا کر

اے چاند سنبھال اپنے اجالوں کا سیھ بوجھ
تھک جاتی ھوں اکثر تیرے احسان اُٹھا کر

بُھولے سے ان آنکھوں میں کوئ رنگ جو آئے
لے جاتا ھے بپھرا ھوا کوئ اشک بھا کر

جس کے سبھی حرف وھاں مستجاب ٹھھریں
اے دوست میری خاطر آج ایسی دعا کر

ھاں غیر سھی پھر بھی آزمانے میں کیا حرج؟
رکھ لیں گے تیرا درد بھی مھمان بنا کر

اتنا بھی نھیں مشکل ھر چیز بُھلا دینا
تجھ کو بھی بھلا دیں گے، کبھی خود کو بھلا کر

یھ ھجر نصیب اپنی بھٍَاروں سے ھیں بچھڑے
کیا پاؤ گے سُوکھے ھوے پتوں کو جلا کر

جاتے ھو تو اشکوں کی نشانی مجھے دے دو
رکھ لے گی حریم اِن کو بھی آنچل میں سَجا کر

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7: Noor-al-Sabah

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8: gumaan

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9: Aas

Dekha hai keyi baar chiraghon ko bujha ker
Ke dikhta nahin undhere main kuch khauf-e-khuda ker

Woh tare tor laya tha tere kehne pe bekaraan
Main Musharraf ko bech aaon ga teri ik jaan-e-ada per

Woh musti-e-match-e-banglore yaad hai aaj bhi
Jub TV tor diya tha hum nain Josh main aa ker

Mere qaum ke naujwaano balla to sehi pukro
Phir kehti hain mummy khelo beta, tukhna bucha ker

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10: Meesam Kazmi

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11: silent_wishes

main raakh banaa khud hee teri yaad jalaa ker
dekhaa hai kayii baar charaghau'N ko bujaa ker

iss gard pe likhii hovii thehreer parrhaa ker
halaath ke auraaq se kuch seekh liya ker

woh qat'l bhi kertaa hai mujay thaish maiN aa ker
phir ronay wo lagthaa hai mera khoon bahaa ker

jo din ke ujalay maiN mujay chorr geya thaa
kion raat ko sataaye mujay khwaab main aa ker

kehtay hain sabhi laug mujay, uss ko bhulaa do!
kia yaad rahay gaa mujay phir uss ko bhulaa ker?

hum aur teray husn ki ta'reef karengaiN
rootay ho tho ek baar kabhi haN's bhi liya ker!

har giz nahi basaanaa khabi kaaNch ki dunyaa
jo toot ke bhikray nahi'N, woh khwaab bunaa ker

woh meri mohabbat maiN mujay maar hee degaa
ab aa ke masihaa meri iss baar dawa ker

jab zik'r meraa chirr geya ahbaab main uss ke
roya hai woh khud bhi meray ahwaal sunaa ker

uljhogay tho her ek teraa dushman hee banay gaa
~ihsan~ her ek baat ko dil per na liyaa ker

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12: Shehr-e-Wafa

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13: Zeneya

Andhero.n kay musafir ko naye rah pe la ker
Dekha hay kaye bar charaghoo.n ko bujha ker

Har chan.d kai yadoon pe hain us shaks ke pehray
Har jazba phir bhi rakha dil mai us se chupa ker

Tum se thi jab mili tuo ye socha bhi nahi tha
Chor jao gay ankho.n may tum sapno.n ko saja ker

Aik umar se bethi hoon uski yaad may gum sum
Aik woo hay jo sota bana hay mujh ko jaga ker

Uski is bewafa.i may kuch tou hath tha apna
Chor ayi thi usay mai raqeeboo.n may bitha ker

Halat meri kaho tou mujhe khud nahi maloom
Bass ye hay ke ro leti ho mai khud ko hasa ker

Aahain meri ansoon meray ye kehtay hain mujh se
Shayad wo bhi behal hay kuch,hum ko ganwa ker

Na janay us ki ankho.n mai kiun pheli hay udasi
Ye janti hoon khush hay woo mujh ko mita ker

Har jhoot phir us ka mujhe sach kiun laga Zene
Bolo zara jo pyar se woo mujh ko mana ker

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14: Bailamos_

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bohat shukriya

khush rahiye
HG Intazamiya.