 Re: Zakham hai jo rooh pey meri.. | |
Tahseen bhai achi gahzal kahi hy aap ne , kuch sher to mujhy bohat hi achy lagy, aap ne "murad ber laana" ko achy andaz meiN istamal kiya hy...
mager abhi rhythm meiN improvement ki zuroorat hy, aur sath hi urdu poetry k deegar rumooz ki taraf bhi tawaju ki zuroorat hy, aap Poets Club k sticky thread "Poetry Tutorials" ko zuroor study kreN, bohat kuch seekhny ko mily ga.
isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN...... |