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Nazmi Sahab ap ko Urdu Poets Club meiN khush-aamadeed!!!
umeed krty haiN k aap k sath acha waqt guzry ga1.gif ")1")
bai kya khoob ghazal pesh ki hy aap ne. sary sher hi laiq-e-staish haiN, so meri janib se dheroN daad is umda ghazal ki nazr, mujhy khas kr ye sher bohat pasand aaya:
"fana gehry samunder meiN dabo de gi jahazoN ko,
baqa tuTy huay bazu ko bhi patwar kr de gi...."
isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN, khush raheN, aabad raheN. Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary....
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Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha
aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...
(Bedil Haidri)
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