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 raa'y shumari bra'y muqabla-e-nazm goi (June 07) | |
As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! is bar muqabla-e-nazm goi ke liye unwan tajweez kiya gya tha: Zindgi hmaiN bohat khushi hy k is bar bhi hmaiN bohat si khubsurat nazmeN paRhny ko miliN... hum un tamam members ke shukar guzar haiN jinhoN ne muqablay maiN shirkat ki aur apni khubsooorat tahareer hum sab ke sath share keeN... jaisa ke aap sab ko ilm hai ke muqablay ke nataaij ka ailaan judges ke mushtarka faislay par mabni hoga...Judges say guzarish hai ke woh 30th June 2007 tak is thread maiN apne faislay say aagah karaiN...judges har nazam ko 1-10 tak marks daiNgay..aur aakhir maiN tamaam judges ke diye gaye marks ko jama kar ke hatmi nataaij ka ailaan kia jayega... hmaiN ye bta'ty huay bhi khushi mehsoos ho rahi hy k Judges k panel meiN o shakhsiaat ka izafa kiya gya hy, jin k nam ye haiN: Sohail Malik & Sahir (Ali Zubair) so is thrha judges panel meiN shamil members k naam darj-e-zail haiN: (Sohail Malik, Sahir, Ankaboot, Aik Lamha, Zain, Mehtab & WanderingThoughts) Evalutaion ka criteria yeh hai Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul) mozu se insaf (5 marks)
total marks = 10
muqablay maiN shamil nazmaiN yeh haiN:
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-=Zindagi is kadar=-
Zindagi is kadar hamko rulati rahi
Har khushi paas aane se pehle door jaati rahi
Gham se naata hai shayad apna pichhle janam se
Tabhi to har khushi gham mein badal jaati rahi
Chaha jo kuch bhi hamne na mila hamko
Ek adhoori si chahat ban ke reh gaya sab kuch
Ki koshish kabhi hamne jeetne ki kuch bhi to
Hamari hi kismat aa kar hamein harati rahi
Lad bhi lete ham mukadar se gar koi apna hota
Aur badal bhi dete ham shayad apni taqdeer ko
Par bhagte rahe jis manzil ko paane ki khaatir
Woh manzil bhi hamse door jaati rahi
Aisa nahi ke koi nahi tha hamara yahan
Har rishta hai banaya aur apnaya hamne
Aur har rishte ki khaatir khud ko bhi hai mitaya hamne
Par shayad kachchi reh jaati thi gaanth har rishte ki
Jo thoda sa kheenchne pe hi khul jaati rahi
Bahut roye hai ham hasne ke baad har waqt
Aur behte bhi rahe hai yeh bewafa aansu in aankhon se
Par ek yeh hansi shayad wafadar hai apni
Jo has has ke har gham ko chhupaati rahi
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Aey Zindagi!!!
Aey Zindagi bata de! Tu ney humko kia dia hey ?
yeh khoi khoi si shamain ?
yeh bujhi bujhi si raatain ?
kahi un kahi si baatain ?
Tujhey jeeney ki chaah main jo
mili be-shumar ghaat'ain ...
Aey Zindagi bata de! Tu ney humko kia dia hey ?
Yeh suta suta sa chehra ?
yeh toota hua sa lehja ?
kuch miti hui lakeerain ?
kuch ruki hui si saansain ?
mili humko ja-baja jo
wo hazaar- ha maat'ain ...
Aey Zindagi bata de! Tu ney humko kia dia hey ?
Miley humko baar-ha jo ujaar ujaar rastey ?
Aik be-nishaa'n manzil , yeh thakki thakki si raah'ain ?
bikhra hua sa kaajal ' yeh roi roi si ankhain ...
Aey Zindagi bata de! Tu ney humko kia dia hey ?
Mujhey Zindagi bata de .... ------------------------------------------------ 8- <!-- google_ad_section_st art(weight=ignore) -->bailamos_<!-- google_ad_section_en d -->  <!-- google_ad_section_en d --> ------------------------------------------------ 9-<!-- google_ad_section_st art(weight=ignore) -->HijjAr<!-- google_ad_section_en d --> Zindgii tOo Ney Hamein Har ROz Naii Baat Mein Dhalla
kyOu Na tOo Ney mUjhey Meri Hii Is Zaat Mein Dhalla
Sehtey hAin hUm mOhabbat Mein Kaii Azaab Masalsal
KyOu Khultey hAin Merey Leye dArd Key Baab Masalsal
KyOu tOo Ney mUjhey Ishq Key Kharabaat Mein Dhalla
KhOon e JiGger Sey Din Raat hAin Yeh Armaan Nikaltey
hUm Dekhien Bhala KaiSey Khud Apni Yeh jAan Nikaltey
kyOu tOo Ney Hamein Naza'a Key Azabat Mein Dhalla
KyOu hUm Sey Guraizaan hAi mOun Phair Key Chalti hAi
Jis Sey hAi Hamein WehShat Ussi Rang Mein dhAltii hAi
kyOu Ulajhey hOye Rakhti Ho KyOu HaDShat Mein Dhalla
Zindgii hUm Ney Abhe tUjh Ko Jeya Bhe To Nahii hAi
hUm Ney Abhe jAam e Khyaat Peya Bhe To Nahii hAi
KyOu tOo Ney Har Lamha Mera mUShkulat Mein Dhalla
KyOu mUjh Ko Deya tOo Ney Bata Yeh dArd e jUdaii
KyOu Meri Khushi Zindgii tUjh Ko Bhala Raas Nahii Aaii
KyOu Din Ko Mere tOo Ney Siyaah Raat Mein Dhalla
Kya bhOol hOii hUm Sey Jo Di tOo Ney Itni Sazaien
KyOu Hijjr Mein Har Lamha KhOon Yeh Aankhien Rulaien
KyOu tOo Ney Hamein AskhOun Ki BarSaat Mein Dhalla
hUm Tak Na Kabhi POhnchii KyOu Yeh ViSaal Ki dOlat
Zindgii tOo Ney Faqt Bakhshii mUjhey Malaal Ki dOlat
KyOu tOo Ney mUjhey Bata Hijjr Key Lamhaat Mein Dhalla ------------------------------------------------ khush rahiye HG Administration ------------------------------------------------ Note: Aap tamam sathiyoN se guzarish hay kay iss thread meiN post na kijiye... Judges k ilawa kisi bhi member ki post delete kerdi jaye gi...
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Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha
aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...
(Bedil Haidri)
Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 06-22-2007 at 09:37 AM.
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