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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts  aik aur umda ghazal share ki hy aap ne Afzal Sahab, tamaam sher hi laiq-e-sta'ish haiN... khyalaat, misroN ka baha'ao aur rhythm sab kuch hi bohat khoobsurat hy.... ye teen sher bohat pasand aa'ay... dusry sher k aakhri lafz ko thoRa tabdeel kiya hy, umeed hy aap ko garaN na guzry ga...
Main kaya keroun jo na keroun kantoun se dosti
Phooloun mein reh ke bhi to parishahn raha houn main
Sooli pe charh ke theek hi mansoor ne kiya
Maqtal main khoon se likh diya yazdahn raha houn main
De de ke her ghareeb ke aangun ko chandni
Afzal na jane kis leay werahn raha houn main
isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share kty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, abad raheN..... |
Thanks Faizan bhai........I am proud of your suggestion and I have replaced the specified word.I have no words to express my gratitude for your keen services in beautifying my artistic works.Ever.......... .. praying for you.