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Old 06-18-2007, 03:07 PM
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Default Re: Jis gul ka bun ke khar nigabahn raha houn main

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Originally Posted by kanwal Hussain View Post
Sooli pe charh ke theek hi mansoor ne kaha

Maqtal main khoon se likh diya yazdahn raha houn main


Un ko sulla ke payar ke phooloun ke baagh mein

Raanjhe ki tarah dasht mein gerdahn raha houn main


Pather ko jis ke lams ne goher bana diya

Kha kha ke us ki thokrain nadahn raha houn main


Mangain ge Gibrael bhi junnut khuda se phir

Ye keh ke ehl-e- bait ka derbahn raha houn main
wah ...wahh....kia zabar dast likha aap ne aur in teen shairoN k khiyalaat to is qadar mufarid aur shandar hain k bar bar perhnay ko ji chahta hai likhtay rahain ...khush rahin...mazeed ka intizar rahay ga...
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