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 Re: Jis gul ka bun ke khar nigabahn raha houn main | |
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Originally Posted by faypal  Jis gul ka bun ke khar nigabahn raha houn main
Us gul ki tarah chaak garibahn raha houn main
Laai hai kis ki maut lub-e-izrael per
Junnut mein mehwe sujda-e-insahn raha houn main
Main kaya keroun jo na keroun kantoun se dosti
Phooloun mein reh ke bhi to parishahn raha houn main
Sooli pe charh ke theek hi mansoor ne kaha
Maqtal main khoon se likh diya yazdahn raha houn main
Un ko sulla ke payar ke phooloun ke baagh mein
Raanjhe ki tarah dasht mein gerdahn raha houn main
Pather ko jis ke lams ne goher bana diya
Kha kha ke us ki thokrain nadahn raha houn main
Mangain ge Gibrael bhi junnut khuda se phir
Ye keh ke ehl-e- bait ka derbahn raha houn main
De de ke her ghareeb ke aangun ko chandni
Afzal na jane kis leay werahn raha houn main | aik aur umda ghazal share ki hy aap ne Afzal Sahab, tamaam sher hi laiq-e-sta'ish haiN... khyalaat, misroN ka baha'ao aur rhythm sab kuch hi bohat khoobsurat hy.... ye teen sher bohat pasand aa'ay... dusry sher k aakhri lafz ko thoRa tabdeel kiya hy, umeed hy aap ko garaN na guzry ga... Main kaya keroun jo na keroun kantoun se dosti Phooloun mein reh ke bhi to parishahn raha houn main Sooli pe charh ke theek hi mansoor ne kiya Maqtal main khoon se likh diya yazdahn raha houn main De de ke her ghareeb ke aangun ko chandni Afzal na jane kis leay werahn raha houn main isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share kty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, abad raheN.....
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