first time apki poetry read ki achi kavish ha per rawani mai kami ha baykhud si kavish k socha ore likhtay gay but achi try ha ore iss line main
baal jhata gehri kali si
issmai shaid spelling mistake ha gahta ko jhata likh diya ha gour kijiya ga
overall theme achi ha likhtay rahay pre ziada pukhtagi aya gi
wish u all the best

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