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Default Re: han kabhi hasrat say..........

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Originally Posted by shazlay View Post
aoa..es dafa kafi gap k baad likha ha kuch ore kuch kami si lug rahi ha complete hounay k baad b issnazam main pr yeh sab ap batain gay k kaisi ha kya kami ha so mai wait keru gi ap sabki tarref or tanqeed ka zaroor bataiya ga kaisi lagi ore meray systm mai i think koi prb ha so mai fonts ko bold nahi ker saki .na colur day saki ...

HAN KABHI.........

Kabhi hasrat kabi aas say
Kabhi seerab kabi pias say
Kabhi sahil kabhi mojh say
Kabhi ajnabi kabhi habeeb say
Kabhi aina kabhi seep say
Kabhi chaon kabhi dhoop say
Kabhi guman kabhi yaqen say
Kabhi ansu kabhi muskan say
Kabhi bebas kabhi nadan say
Kabhi anjan kabhi mehrban say
Kabhi hijar kabhi vesaal say
Kabhi arzu kabhi malaal say
kabhi bahar kabhi weeran say
Kabhi door tak musaftain
Kabhi pal pal sath say
Kabhi lamha lamha rooh mai dahltay
Kabhi asman per ubhertay chand say
kabhi hasil kabhi lahsil say ....
Suno …….
mughay tum zindagi say kion lagtay ho ?…..
wa-alaikum-as-salam Shazlay Sahiba!

waqaei aap ne kafi arse bad kuch share kiya hamary sath, aur ab to Has'san bhai ki bhi koi takhleeq paRhy mud'dat ho gai hy...

laap ki nazm achi hy... kabhi ki takraar bhi khoob hy... aur her do jazbat ka tazaad bhi khoob pesh kiya ap ne.... lekin abhi in satroN meiN rawani ki kami mehsos ho rahi hy, aur nazm ka unwaan bhi tawaju chahta hy...

overall aik achi nazm pesh krny pr daad hazir hy, qubool kreN....

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziadaa ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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