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Originally Posted by mohsin naqvi  thankxxxxxxxxx faizan pai
k ap ko nazam pasand aii
actully mein nay ridhm k bager likhnay ki koshish ki thi
nasar ki soorat mein pata nahin kamyab howa k nahin
kher me behtari ki koshish karoon ga
sada khush rahein
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Zeeshan bhai aik bat arzna chahuN ga, rhythm k baghair poetry nahi ho sakti...
be-shak wo aazad nazm ho ya simply nasri-nazm.... dono k liay kuch usool hoty haiN...
ager aap ne rhythm k baghair likhna chaha tha to ap isy aazad nazm na kehty....
