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Originally Posted by safeena  Salam,
Bhai saheb, meri ghalati hai mein manta hoon laikin ab poori appki wali kar dee hai, shair bhee poora badal dia hai, yaar thori bohat islaah kay baad to mein phir bhee keh sakta tha kay yeh ghazal meri hai, laikin bhai ab to yeh ghazal app ki ho gaee hai, so agar chahein to lay liejh ga mujhay koi aitraaz nahee hoga, kion kay itni mehnat to iss par mein nay khud bhee nahee ki thee jitni app nay. | Walekum Aslam,
 arrey naheen bhaahi,aesi bi koyi baat naheen hai,ham sab yahaan seekhney ke liye aatey hain,aor koshish kartey hain ke aek doosarey se kuchh seekha jaaye,aor jo ham jaantey hain woh doosaron ko bataaya jaaye,kiyoon ke bad qismati se ham main se aksar sirf apne shoq hi ki bina par qalam uthaatey hain,aor un ko koyi bhi baaqaaida sikhaaney waala naheen,(main ne bhi jo seekha,yaheen,issi foram main,inhi doston se seekha),...so umeed karta hoon ke aap bhi hamaarey saath is kaam main aagey aayain ge,1.gif ")1")
jahaan tak aap ki is ghazal ki baat hai to yeh aap hi ki thi,aor aap hi ki hai,.....choonke ghazal waaqayi bahot khoobsurat thi,..is liye us main mujhey jo,do aek khaamiyaan nazar aayain,mujh se nazarandaaz na ho sakeen, Quote:
Originally Posted by safeena waisay jo misra mein na badla tha wo sahee nahee tha kia?? :( | naheen,us misrey ki wajah se sher ka husn maand par raha tha,to socha ke jab yeh khoobsurat ho sakta hai,to kiyoon na koshish ki jaaye,aap ka shukriya ke aap ne,merey alfaaz ko maan diya,..wesey yeh sirf aek tajweez thi, Quote:
Originally Posted by safeena yaar masla yeh hai kay taqtee seekhnay ki koshish to ki hai, parh parh kay laikin jab tak koi mujhay samnay beth kay nahee samjhaye ga aik dafa meri naqis aqal mein aanay wala kaam nahee hai yeh. | naheen kher,aap ke liye itna bhi mushkil kaam naheen hai yeh,phir bhi agar aap chaahain to main aap ki madad karney ke liye haazir hoon,,aap chaahain to mujh se PM ya YAHOO/MSN ke zariye raabata kar saktey hain,mujhey khushi ho gi agar main aap ke kissi bhi kaam aa saka to, Quote:
Originally Posted by safeena Waisay sachee baat bataoon itni saari ghalation kay baad to mujhay khud hee buray lagnay lagee hai yeh ghazal.
Raza Alam | arrey naheen yaar,is andaaz main naheen sochtey,....mujhey aek chhoti si baat ka jawaab dain,kaya yeh achha hota ke aap apni har takhleeq main yahi ghaltiyaan dohraatey rehtey? ya yeh achha hai ke aap ki aainda likhi jaaney waali tehreerain ghaltion aor khaamiyon se paak hon?
bahot khush rahiye,shaad o aabaad rahiye, 
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