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 | Ishtiaq | | | Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: London,UK
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 Re: ~Hina ka Rang Jaisay Aarzi ho~ | |
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Originally Posted by safeena  Salam,
Zain appki rah numaai ka bay hudd shukriya, asal mein baat yeh hai kay mein taqtee kay kisi usool par bhee amal nahee karta bus zaban ki rawani aur apnay andazay kay mutaabiq shair kehta hoon aur mujhay andaza hai kay is tarhaan ghalti ki gunjaish ziada hoti hai.
Mein app ka mamnoon hoon kay app nay itni deeda reezi ki meri ghazal par aur sath sath islaah bhee kar daali, shukriya mein nay app kay bataye hoiein tabdeelian kar deen hein, "Bolay" wala poora misra hi badal dia hai usay bhee check kar liejh ga.
W salam
Raza Alam | waslaam,
aap ki baat par sirf itna kahoon ga ke..bhaahi yeh koyi achhi aadat naheen,.taqtee ka koyi aek tareeqa apna lijiye,1.gif ")1")
hain......meri bataayi huyi tabdiliyaan kahaan hain bhaahi,yeh to aadhi meri bataayi huyi hain,lekin baaqi..........-:?
aor jis shair ka aap ne misra tabdeel kiya hai,agar us ko yoon kaha jaaye ke.... the ham donon hi chup, lekin dua hai
jo dil ki thi sada, dil ne suni ho to kesa rahey ga,-:?.......bas aek raaye hai,baaqi aap behtar soch saktey hain,
bahot khush rahiye,
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