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 Re: Raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi (March-07) | |
to all Participants and judges
1. Sher-e-wafa
Muhtarma app ne buhat achi nazam kahi hay, Muzo buhat umdah hay but wazn main buhat gunjaish hay, likhti rahiay aur wazn ki taraf dhiyan dijiay.
Andaz-e-bayaN = 3
Mouzo = 4
Total Marks = 7
2. Subah757
App ki tehrer 1st time parhi aur buhat acha laga, aik umdah nazam hay aur khayalat bhi khoob hain, Go k aj kal nasri nazam ka riwaj buhat aam hay magar app koshish kijiay k wazn k sath kahen nazam ko, hamari janib se is khobsurat kawish par buhat si daad qabool kijiay.
Andaz-e-BayaN = 3
Mouzo = 4
Total Marks = 7
3. Woundring Thoughts
Faizan bhai kia kehne hain app ki is nazam k, dil khush hua app ki itni umdah tehrer parh kar andaz-e-bayaN aur mouzo dono he behtreen rahe.
Andaz-e-bayan = 4
Mouzo = 4.5
Total Marks = 8.5
4. Kanwal Hussain
Kanwal Sahiba app ki tehrer parhi aur hamesha ki tarah app k khobsurat andaz-e-bayaN k garweda hogay, app ki ye tehrer bhi buhat he khobsurat aur haseen hay start se end tak aik sehar sa bandh deti hay k bar bar parhne ko jii chahta hay. buhat si daad qabool kijiay
Andaz-e-bayaN 4.5
Mouzo =4.5
Total Marks = 9
5. Saahir
Ali zubair sahib app ne aik umdah aur khobsurat nasri nazam kahi hay buhat khushi hoi app ka kalam parh kar
Andaz-e-Bayan = 3.5
Mouzo = 4.5
Total Marks= 8
Tamam Participant ko buhat mubarak ho aur best of luck
Buhat khush Rahiay aur likhtay rahiay
Mehtab |