Thread: Raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi (March-07)
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Old 03-30-2007, 10:00 PM
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Default Re: Raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi (March-07)
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1: shehr-e-wafa
wahhh...nazam ka khayal bohat hi khubsoorat hai...kia kehnay..magar baz muqamat par rawani too'ti mehsoos huwi...magar majmooi taur par nazam bohat umda rahi...mozu bhi bohat dilkash hai...marks kuch yooN haiN;

andaz-e-bayaaN = 2.7
mozu = 5
total = 7.7

2: Subha757
PC maiN aik naya izafa daikh kar bohat khushi huwi...apki nazam bhi umda rahi... khayalat achay haiN..agarchay abhi takneeki hawaloN say nazam tawajja talab hai...magar majmooi taur par achi hai..

andaz-e-bayaaN = 2
mozu = 4.6
total = 6.6

3: WanderingThoughts
wahhhh..bohat hi khubsoorat nazam kahi bhai aapne...bohat hi khoob.. bohat pasand ai mujhe yeh nazam..

andaz-e-bayaaN = 4.4
mozu = 4.6
total = 9

4: Kanwal Hussain
wahhhhh... kia bat hai...kia hi kehnay...bohatt hi khubsoorat alfaz..bayhad umda andaz...dilkash ista'aray..

andaz-e-bayaaN = 4.5
mozu = 4.8
total = 9.3

5: Sahir
wahh...sab say mukhtalif andaz liye huwe apki nazam bohat hi khubsoorat rahi...bayhad umda..

andaz-e-bayaaN = 4
mozu = 4.6
total = 8.6

All da best...
khush rahiye
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