ruk ga'ay qaaflay, tehar gai shaam
thak ga'ay herf so sai aawaz
lo ga'ay hambhi kaam se aakhir,
ye gya hosh wo gai aawaz

muntazar kab kisi ki thi Faizan
us ko jana tha, so gai aawaz...

wah kia kehnay
boht hi khoob or purasar
maqtaa to boht hi khoob raha
boht hi pasand aai dher sari daad
aap ki muntazir hay

sab say pehla sher jo red color main mention kia hay
us ki urdu composing main proof ki ghalti hay
zara drust frma lain

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KION HAY ANDHERI SHAB E GHAM HAY BALAOUN KA NAZWAL
AAJ IDHAR HI KO RAHAY GA DEEDA E AKHTAR KHULA