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Old 03-04-2007, 04:43 AM
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Default Re: jaane dil_vaaloN pe is daur meN kia guzregii!...merii ek Ghazal
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WalaikumAssalam
(hehe) Abhi To Yaha'n Say Mai'n Hi Guzar Rahi Thi Is Liye Ghazal Read Karnay Mai'n Hi Chali Aai (hehe)
Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Bhi Bouhat Pasand Aai..Aap Ki Ghazlo'n Ka Munfarid Asloob Bouhat Acha Lagta Hay..Asatiza-e-Shaairi Ka Sa Rang Aap Ki Shaairi Mai'n Jhalakta Hay.. Ya Shayed Yeh Maira Waihem Ho (hehe)
Aap Ki Likhi Her Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Achi Lagi..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
is Ghazal ke ek she'r kahte huye meraa "qaafiyaa tang" huwaa waa thaa. achchhaa to, Hayaa saaHiba aapko hii dekh kar lagtaa hai meraa she'r mukammil huaa...thanx

aapke ta'reefe jumle paRh kar kahiiN mujhe Allah na kare Ghuroor na aa jaaye! >: asaatiza to door kii baat hai lagtaa hai aapko vahm hii huwaa hai vo bhii sone kii Haalat meN >:

shukria Hayaa saaHiba aapkaa bahot bahot...aapkii Hausalah-afzaaii mere liye baa'is-e-sad iftiKhaar o masarrat hai. ek baar phir maiN aapkaa shukria adaa kartaa huuN
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