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Originally Posted by aas awan  Aslam o alikum faizan bhai
bohut accha likha asusuall
her lufz apni juga perfect
kaash mujay bi kabhi
aap jaisa likhna aa jaye
bohut khush rahye
aur dua kertay rahain meray liye bi | Aas itny achy andaaz maiN ghazal ko sraahny ka bohat shukriya... infact aap mujh se bhi acha likh sakti haiN.. maiN ne aap ka jis qadar qalaam parha hy us se ye to zahi hy k aap maiN khyaal-aafreini bohat hy... bas problem us ko behter andaaz maiN bayan krny ki hy... mera mashwara hy k is Poets club maiN KKM(kanch ki mehroo) ki laga'ei gai sticky thread (poetry tutorials) se istifada kreN... aap bohat kuch seekh pa'aiN gi... Allah Mola aap ki madad kary, aur aap ko hmesha shaad-o-aabad rakhy.... |