Thread: Raaye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi.. (Jan-07)
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Old 01-30-2007, 07:43 PM
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Default Re: Raaye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi.. (Jan-07)
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Ragni:
apki nazam umda rahi Ragni...khayalat achay thay...lekin .. abhi kuch hawaloN say nazam tawajja talab hai...jaisa ke rawani , andaz-e-bayaN...takhayyul ki mazbooti waghaira...apki nazam ke marks kuch yooN haiN;
andaz-e-bayaaN=2.5
mozu=3
total=5.5

Miss Naqvi:
apki nazam ka khayal bohat umda raha...alfaz ka chunai bhi khoob tha..magar abhi rawani ke hawalay say khasi kami mehsoos huwi .. marks kuch yooN haiN;
andaz-e-bayaaN=3.5
mozu=3.5
total=7

Kanwal Hussain:
Kanwal...apki janib say aik bar phir...bohat khubsoorat nazam parhnay ko mili...nazam ka khayal mujhe bohat pasand aaya..alfaz ka chunao bhi khoob tha aur unwan bhi bohat umda...apki nazam ke marks yeh haiN;
andaz-e-bayaaN=4
mozu=4.5
total=8.5

aap sab dostoN ki shirkat ka bayhad shukriya...umeed hai aainda bhi apni khubsoorat poems ke sath muqabloN maiN shirkat kartay rahaiN gay...

khush rahiye
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