 Re: Yaad e Madina | |
Ary Humair Bhai bohat khoob Naat kahi hy ap ne...
maiN bohat sharminda huN k bar'ha yahaN aany k bawajud ap k thread ko ghor se na parh saka...
bai aap to bohat khushnaseeb insaan haiN k aap ne
ba-huzur Sarkaar-e-kul-jahaN (S.A.W.) nazrana-e-aqeedat pesh kiya.....
baqaul Abbas Tabish:
wo na chaheN to kahaN naat kahi jati hy,
midh-e-serkaar ki manzil hy, huner se aagy....
so meri janib se bohat mubarik-baad
aur bohat si naik tamannaa'aiN hazir-e-khidmat haiN...
Allah Mola aap k in aqeedat bhary kalmat ko sharaf-e-qubooliat bakhshy...
aur aap ko bohat ziada ata kary...
lekin aik bat sher ki technicality k hawaly se zurur krna chahuN ga:
aap ne ye shaar likhty waqt qafia aur radeef ka khyal nahi rakha,
jis se ye kawish technically weak ho gai hy...
mujhy umeed hy k aap ko qafia aur radeef k bary maiN aaga'hi zurur ho gi...
plz is kawishpr qafia aur radeef k hawaly se nazr-e-sani kreN...
wish u all the best.
Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 01-06-2007 at 08:03 AM.
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