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 | sad~sad | | | Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Islamabad
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 Re: bojh dil say utara hay | |
bai wah.... Ali bhai kiya khoob ghazal kahi hy aap ne...
aur itni achi behs chal rahi hy ap k aur Zain bhai k dermian k ji chahta hy abhi ilm ka tabad'la jari rahy...
lekin aik point mery zehn maiN bhi hy... (wazn aur shatr ghurba se hat kr...)
"Ajnabi shehr hy, saNbhal kr chal
kaun is shehr maiN hamara hy..."
is sher main lafz "Ajnabi" dosry misry maiN kahi gai bat ko mukamal tor pr bayan kr deta hy... yani malum hota hy k sher maiN aik hi bat ko do bar byaN kiya gya hy, jo kisi bhi trha mozuN nahi...
so kindly isy dobara dekh leN...
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Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha
aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...
(Bedil Haidri)
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