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Originally Posted by zain  Bahot shukriya Saahir saahib ke aap ne waqt nikala,aor reply kiya,1.gif ")1") wesey mujhey hairat is baat par ho rahi hai ke jab aap wazn/behar ke is paimaaney ke qaail naheen to baaqi shair wazn main kesey ho gaye,....aor doosari baat yeh ke merey is shair ko wazn main karney se aap ko kesey kuchh seekhaney ko miley ga,(jabke aap to wazn ke is paimaaney ko hi naheen maanatey). ji aap ne theek pehchaana,...main punjab ka hi rehney waala hoon,....lekin mera khayaal hai,aor jahaan tak meri ma.aloomaat hain urdu shaairy ke asool ilaaqaayi bol chaal ki takhsees se paak hain,ab chaahey koyi Punjaabi ho,ya dahli ya lakhnao ya ali garh ka rehney waala,urdu shaairy ke asool wohi rahain ge jo ke hain,............... kheir.......yeh meri bilkul zaati raaye thi,jis ka izhaar main ne apni pehli post main kiya,........aor is se itafaaq karna ya na karna aap ke hi ikhtiyaar main hai, agar koyi baat nagawaar guzri ho to us ke liye ma.azarat chahoon ga, bahot khush rahiye, |
hmm piyaray zain ji boht boht shukriya,,,,yaar mera ye matlab nahi tha,,urdu k asool is bahs main nahi aatay,,,main ny is liye kaha tha k shatr gurba nahi hay,,,daikho main misaal daita hon,,hosakta hay sha,ir nay chal apnay kisi humrahi ko kaha ho,,,or phir tum ny jis terha shater gurba ki qand yehan legaae hay to phir poori ghazal is ki zad main aani chahiye,,poori ghazal main humara seegha e waahid main istamal huwa hay,,or yaar tum nay wazan ki jo nishandahi ki hy wo tum ny apni jaga bilkul drust ki hy,,iski detail main janay k liye boht taweel guftugo ki zaroorat hay jo iswqt mumkin nahi hy,,,,,,,,,,
tum yaqeen kero zain mujhay is baat ki boht khushi hy k tum nay itnay ghoar say is ghazal ko perha,,main iska wazan poora krnay ki koshish keron ga,,,or aakhri baat ye meray piyaray dost main ny punjaab ka ziker kisi tassub ki akkasi k liye nahi kiya tha,,urdu to hay hi ilaqaee zubaan,,isay is k ilaqon say yaad kiya jata hy,,,,,aleegarehi,ka npoori,dakanni,dahlw i,,lakhnawi,,bachapo ori,,amratsari,,laho ri,,,aisay hi or bhi boht hain,,,,ye sab urdo ka jhoomar hain,,salam