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Old 11-18-2006, 06:56 PM
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Originally Posted by saahir View Post
zain tum theek kah rahay ho,,,yaar wazan k is paimanay ka main qaail nahi hon,,,,tum khud say agar yehan wazan poora kerdo gay to mujhay kuch seekhnay ko mil jaaiy ga,,,,,rahi baat zain shutar ghurba ki,,,,,asal lafz hay shutar gurba,,,,,,,,mera khiyal hy roman likhnay main ghalti hogae hogi,,,,,zain main tumhain nahi jaanta,,laikin tumharay is pahlo k ujaagar krnay say mujhay ye andaza huwa hy k tum shayed panjaab say talluq rakhtay ho,,,agar tum dahli ya lakhnao ya ali garh ki urdu ko perho to shayed hosakta hy tum ittifaaq kero k chal k saath humara shutar gurba nahi hy,,,,,or phir yaar sha,ir ko kuch to riyaayat lainay do,,,,,girtay pertay hum bhi kuch seekh hi jaain gay,,,apnay qeemti mashwaron say nawaztay rahna,,,,,hamara bhala hota rahay ga
Bahot shukriya Saahir saahib ke aap ne waqt nikala,aor reply kiya,
wesey mujhey hairat is baat par ho rahi hai ke jab aap wazn/behar ke is paimaaney ke qaail naheen to baaqi shair wazn main kesey ho gaye,....aor doosari baat yeh ke merey is shair ko wazn main karney se aap ko kesey kuchh seekhaney ko miley ga,(jabke aap to wazn ke is paimaaney ko hi naheen maanatey).
ji aap ne theek pehchaana,...main punjab ka hi rehney waala hoon,....lekin mera khayaal hai,aor jahaan tak meri ma.aloomaat hain urdu shaairy ke asool ilaaqaayi bol chaal ki takhsees se paak hain,ab chaahey koyi Punjaabi ho,ya dahli ya lakhnao ya ali garh ka rehney waala,urdu shaairy ke asool wohi rahain ge jo ke hain,............... kheir.......yeh meri bilkul zaati raaye thi,jis ka izhaar main ne apni pehli post main kiya,........aor is se itafaaq karna ya na karna aap ke hi ikhtiyaar main hai,
agar koyi baat nagawaar guzri ho to us ke liye ma.azarat chahoon ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
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