 Re: Bojh | |
bai wah... bohat khoob nazm kahi hy...
ye nazm bhi apny khyaal aur andaaz k lehaz se bohat aala hy...
aik bat kahuN ga, k ap achi nazm likh leti haiN, alfaaz ko bhi achy andaaz maiN istamal kr leti haiN... aur wo jo nazm ka aik canvas set krna hota hy, wo bhi ap khoob kr leti haiN... mujhy jo kami is waqt nazr aa rahi hy ap ki nazmoN maiN wo sirf aur sirf wazn ki hy....
so mera mashwara ye hy k ap wazn ki taraf sanjeedgi se tawaju deN... ta-k ye bunyadi kami bhi dur ho saky...
aik bar phir meri janib se dheroN daad is achi nazm ki nazr..
Allah Mola ap ko khush rakhy aur bohat ziada ata kary....
Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 11-10-2006 at 06:48 AM.
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