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Old 11-03-2006, 01:57 PM
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Default Re: pata nahi ye qitta hai ya nahi

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Originally Posted by urs_always View Post
Assalamualaikum...

dosto ye maine likh tu diya laikin pata nahi ye qitta hai ya nahi ... bas khayalat ko ashaar ki shakal dedi hai ... ab ye shayeri ke asool aur zawabit per poora utarta hai ya nahi mujhe nahi maloom.. aap logon ki raaye aur rahnumaai ka intezaar rahega..



Ek nazar dekhlo pyar se phir chahe rooth jana
ek teri inayat ki nazar kafi hai mere jeene ke liye

duniya main tu may khaane buhat hai laikin
teri mastana nazar se pi lon tu meri pyas bujhe..
ye qita hergiz nahi hy,,ye aik nazm hasekti hy agar isay change kerain to
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