thnx dear afsana...........
ab mujhe aapki aql par taras aaraha hai mistique ye 4th comment hai aapka........aap yahaan mod hain .aapko shayeri samjhna chahiye ye ek bahut bada forum hai .aapko likhne wale ka style janana chahiye saari meri poetry mere hi andaz me hai .......well i wud like to talk ur admin .its insulting now................. ...

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